Monday, August 30, 2010

Narrative o' Narrative

Narrative...

Character voice...

First, Second and Third persons... then there is omniscient voice.

You can actually have mixed elements of voices. I never realized the amount of schizophrenia that is a latent presence on the pages of a book. All these voices come from one head, transposed to hopefully lucent pages to form a great story.

To speak as the narrator in a novel, you need to establish distance from a character. The closer you are, the more the character drives the novel and the plot drives the theme less.

I look at the great novelist that mastered the character driven novel. People like Hemingway, who made you feel a part of the character, walking the streets of Spain...

The main character in my manuscript is not held by the narrative voice. The narrator follows him, an after action reporting - My narrator has no prescience, the little man on a my character's shoulder pointing out what Devin Briar does.

The narrator also precedes Devin, a before action reporting of what lies ahead or around a corner.

The trick here is balance, or the reader gets lost. Have you ever read a book and found a place that seemed confused? More often than not, it was a slip in narration. The little guy on the shoulder nodded off for an ill timed nap (A writer never writes in slapping the little shoulder guy awake... maybe the Editor should write that part in?)

The narrative is the make or break of any story. The best plot in the world would sound like a list of things done without a great narrative voice.

The next time you read a book, if you loved the main character, tip your hat to the narrator. Without him, I GUARANTEE you would have closed the book at page one.


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Friday, August 27, 2010

Writing anything is worthy

I've written a novel... Yup! Thousands of words, with characters I truly love.

Next? I have to edit. Again and again, slicing my way through the overgrowth of words to the core of what is acceptable to an agent, editor or publisher. I bleed with every slice... Not really, but I should. Toiling with what can stay, versus what has to go, can break one's will or vision.

I started this writing journey with the idea that I would write my story just for me. To see if I could stay with the project long enough to finish... and I did.

Devin Briar is a (what I now know) lengthy tome. He's the point I talk about in the Yin and Yang post. The middle point, without which, nothing can be right. He's flawed, as a good character should be. His reliance on his friend (and her on him) an overriding theme in the novel.

Where I go to learn about writing and writers is a blog: http://blog.nathanbransford.com/.

This an interesting site, filled with far less crazies than other sites for writers I've visited. It's a site that asked those that post to encourage, rather than discourage. No one pontificates, or belittles others for their work. Finding a beta reader in my genre (Commercial Fiction) is tough, but everyone pitches in.

Anyway, just thought I'd post an answer to "What the hell has he been doing? He hasn't posted in months????"